dbskyler (dbskyler) wrote in calufrax,

rec: the stardust trail leading back to you, by queenofhearts

Yesterday we lost a member of the Doctor Who family: the lovely Elisabeth Sladen, who portrayed Sarah Jane Smith, one of the most popular characters in the history of the Whoniverse. In light of this sad event, I tried to think of what kind of fic I myself would want to read today, and came up with the choice below. It's one of the first fics I ever read on Teaspoon, and it's still an all-time favorite of mine. It brings me comfort today, and I hope it does the same for you:

Story: The Stardust Trail Leading Back to You
Author: queenofhearts
Rating: All Ages
Word Count: 1499
Author's Summary: The night sky exploded with diamonds; a sea of white hot sparks that hung in the air for a split second, motionless.
Characters/Pairings: Sarah Jane Smith, Eighth Doctor, Maria Jackson, Luke Smith, Clyde Langer
Warnings: None

Recced because: The Eighth Doctor happens across Sarah Jane, who is watching fireworks with Maria, Luke and Clyde. (Although the teens appear in the fic, no knowledge of Sarah Jane Adventures is needed -- I hadn't seen the show when I first read this.) The writing is descriptive and lyrical, weaving the scene and then immersing us in it until we're carried along with the characters, enjoying their reunion. But what really sets this fic apart is the ending, as the author steps back and leaves the scene to the Doctor and Sarah, and to them alone. All we know is that whatever happened, it made the Doctor happy. We're left to invent the details, but rather than being frustrating, the ambiguity makes it a perfect little moment, residing forever within our imaginations.

How he had even spotted her in amongst the crowd, picked her perfect face out of the hundreds that had swirled past in a blink of an eye, he had no idea, but for the rest of his lives he would be forever grateful that he had.

She was older now than she had been that day in South Croydon, her hair shorter and lighter in colour. Oh, but lady time had been good to her. She was even more beautiful than his memories had led him to believe.
Tags: author: queenofhearts, companion: sarah, doctor: 8, rating: all ages, reccer: dbskyler, sja: clyde, sja: luke, sja: maria, type: gen

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