Lamia MacDonald (redjaywrites) wrote in calufrax,
Lamia MacDonald
redjaywrites
calufrax

rec: Time, Patience (And a Pinch of Hate)

Story: Time, Patience (And a Pinch of Hate)
Author: a_phoenixdragon
Rating: Teen
Word Count: 297
Author's Summary: The God would learn there was no such thing as Mercy.
Characters/Pairings: Other Character(s), River Song, The Doctor (11th), The TARDIS
Warnings: Discussion of death

Recced because: A very short piece, since Is started with a very long one. It is short, sweet, and to the point. It feels a little to me like a shopping list for somebody planning a murder. The structure is interesting (one sentence per paragraph) but that adds to it's charm. The author really gets into the head of the psychopath while making you feel that the villains are clever gits who really don't know what they're doing, and the theme and word repetition is dizzying. I especially love the baking imagery.
Tags: author: phoenixdragon, character: river song, character: tardis, doctor:11, rating: teen, reccer: redjaywrites, type: gen
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